tiny little ramblings...
The end of a season
Sunrise in the horizon
Man sleeps on
***
The little tadpole cries
A lotus blooming in the swamp
The dew can but quench thirst
***
The thunder clouds look dark
Spears can't penetrate the rain
But life is beautiful
Spears can't penetrate the rain
But life is beautiful
***
words spoken lost amidst the noise.
the meaning sometimes unknown.
vague are all echoes.
the meaning sometimes unknown.
vague are all echoes.
***
the frog sits on the withered lotus leaf
the water underneath frozen by the cold
the tears don't wet the world lost below.
the water underneath frozen by the cold
the tears don't wet the world lost below.
posted by Nachi at 11:10 AM
8 Comments:
words spoken lost amidst the noise.
the meaning sometimes unknown.
vague are all echoes.
wow dood
i knew u wud do better than me...
d'Gypsy: ...better nahi hai, its just different (being uncharacteristically modest here) !
you got me hooked to this 'haiku' thingy. the exact structure is tough to follow, but i like to mess around with the 3 liners...
merci!
Try writing more often..and yea..they're loads of haikus joined together. Fab!
the water underneath frozen by the cold
the tears don't wet the world lost below.
Those lines were awesome :-)
that was awesome
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The Future Mantra
Haiku? Kaiku?
Three lines of Sach.
Nothing else much.
My haiku sucks.
WHAT THE?!??!
i was blown aWAYY man!!!
'The little tadpole cries
A lotus blooming in the swamp
The dew can but quench thirst'
IS THIS LANGUAGE OR MUSIC?? HELL i love this!! keep it up.
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